May 22, 2014 in Setting the Tiger Free

The Bloom of Ayalet

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The Bloom of Ayalet
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Dalcohs 5/22/2014, 7:02 AM edit delete
I'm a little uncomfortable with some of of the story elements of this page. I think I've had Otto buckle too easy in letting the Silvestrians go look for their friends. However, I was also worried about spending too much time on a multi-page argument about it or an (even greater) wall of text page.

On the bright side, I think that the many hands on this page are leaps and bounds better than the hands from All Thumbs.

Maybe Kole can find his pilgrims on the Asunder Facebook Page.

Comments:

Dark_Owl 5/24/2014, 2:47 PM edit delete reply
Dark_Owl
I'm hooked! Keep up the good work. I'm a fan of Kole.